Un-knot me
Untie me
Unbend
Honest whispers
Just tell me
Can you really
be a friend?
Un-break me
Unbind me
Un-spell
The sadness
around me
that dwells…
If not heal me
then feel me
my mind…
the heart
that still throbs
like blind
Defeat me
forfeit me
React
ignorance is hurt
and can lack
Un-cry me
Un- tear me
Un- sigh
Undo pain
before it
Un-dies….
Gorgeous. As always.
And so are you…..thankyou so much!
Beautifully written. UN UN UN Break me..positive.Have nice day.jalal
Honoured by your visit sir! Thankyou so much!
Mingles with my heart in a waltz of dance. Am speechless…
Love & hugs
Ohh….i wrote this spontaneously right now without a thought…..I am so humbled that you liked it. You praise me more than i ever deserve. Thankyou so much my kind friend.
Lots of love and hugs back to you!
Wah ji! Abhi kiya….tou aap ki kitaab maar dale gi sab ko!
chaagayi Suri !!!!
Lol….
Kaash! Loved the era of books and ink and true stationary.
Maarne ke liye kya achha weapon hai kitaab janaab….padhte hi padhte sab marr jayenge…Lol…
Well, main bhi woh zamaane ki hoon – kitaab and ink. aaj kal zamaane ki saath main taq chuki hoon. Wa’qai.
Maarne ke liye…umm…let me think…
apni apni zubaan hai pyaare
zarre zrre main jaan hai pyaare
Lol.
Write a poetry book….You MUST.
Just someone like you saying this is an honour for me my friend. You spoil my ego…
I am a nobody…you have so much in you that I see — it would be an honour to have a book of poetry penned by you on my book shelf! Work on it…I know you have this blog, but, Suri, write a book….Think about pls!
having a doost (persian) like you is an honour!
You are just so humble.
You really know how to boost a person’s confidence dear. Feel blessed by your presence.
I don’t think i will get any publishers….never thought my poems were that good or anything.
But i love the thought of it anyways…
You are a sweetheart in every sense of the word.
Leh!!! teri sochh!
Am serious! Koshish kare yaara! Main hoon tumhari saath…kaafi hai to have a beast like me around! Lol.
Confidence kee baat nahi hai Suri — haqeeqat hain. I have belief in your writings and feel you can pen much more. Likho tou sahi…phir publish karenge! Shurun karo meri dost.
And, as for sweetheart — takes one to know the other !!
Un-believably poignant and emotional!
Thankyou so much! Your invaluable feedback is very encouraging….
So breathtakingly beautiful! I agree with sister Shaheen a book of your poems would be an endless treasure of delight to read! God bless! You are that good my sister, have a wonderful day!
Awww…thankyou sooooo much dear brother.
Your kind and generous words can really uplift anyone. I feel so encouraged and overwhelmed!
Prayers are always needed. Your priceless words are a gift enuf for me.
Wish you a bright and beautiful day!
Hi, Sur.
Nice to meet you again
Hugs.
Lol….
Like i had disappeared!
There is feeling apart from pain here…
so, yes, like you have appeared now…
Painfully beautiful. Or beautifully painful. Or both. Though pain is rather…heavy feeling to say the least, you still manage to…give it so many colours instead of only black.
Sweet, enchanting Esenga…thankyou my friend. Indeed pain is a very heavy emotion and no amount of words can do justice to it.
Your appreciation means a lot to me.
I found you…your gravitar doesn’t have a link to your blog…just the pretty picutre…lol. Nice flow of words here…said so much with so little.
Bravo sister! <3
Jazak’Allah dear!
Beautiful yet intriguing! You are so talented.
I am just about ok. But thankyou so much for the appreciation. It’s always very encouraging.
Suri, kahan ho meri dost? Sab theek hai-na?
Na koi khat (email per) aur na koi shai’ri apne blog per– yaara touch base na!
C’mon, I want to hear how you are…ASAP!
Hugs.
I am fine dear friend by Allah’s grace. Sorry, i was sort of out-of-touch with the internet world.
I hope u are doing fine. Miss ya! Will publish a poem soon insha’Allah!
Love and hugs..
Lovely to know you are well, alhamdullilah. We have much to catch up on ! Did you see my recent painting on the blog?
Shall look forward to reading your next poem, dear Suri.
Continue keeping well and may Allah bless you with utmost happiness, my friend. Ameen.
Lots of love & hugs.
(email me what you have been up to!).
Dear Sur, why no poems.. kaise ho.. Exams preparation kya..
I am fine dear…..just a bit out of touch with the blogging world. Will publish a poem soon insha’Allah!
Beautiful and very intriguing piece. EXCELLENT!